Dim forms shifting shapes in cloud,
White descends the cloaking shroud.
Sharp each sound in silence rings.
Wraith-like mist a shudder brings.
A contest entry
- Tanaga by second-born.
900 points, ended January 16, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice images...and the rhymes are great...thank you for sharing this piece!
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Awfully sweet and slight alliteration, love to know what the title means.
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This is an entry in a contest for the Tanaga form which is a traditional Tagalog (Filipino) poem. Although modern examples may have titles, traditionally no titles are added. I have entered 2 of these now, so I have just titled them 1 and 2.
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