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So Deep

so deep is the sea
mountains reaching for my hand
octopus grabs hold

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  • individuality gold member
    March 19

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    i hope you were wearing a mask and tank so you could breathe underwater lol that octopus could have moved off pretty fast. a good poem.


  • Nymphetemine
    January 30

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    Lovely poem dear poet. This must be Haiku? I like the use of the words, beautiful imagery
    Mountains reaching for my hand... Just lovely.
    Love ValkyrieNightWeaver.


    • Emerald Lass
      January 30
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      Yes, haiku, I think. Sometimes I write what I think is haiku and someone says they admire my senyru. Senyru is rather like haiku, but is not about nature and can have people in it.


  • Blossom Fairy
    January 6

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    YIKES! A very dramatic haiku that makes me jerk my hand back and shiver! lol Thank you for coming with your talent, good Lavender.