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Death is as much a birth as borne
Is an end beginning alive.
Waves, lapping upon the shore,
To only go back, again, again. 
Pulled by the gravities of existence

A contest entry

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  • Danna Hobart
    January 8

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    I had to ponder those first two lines for a moment, but it finally sunk in, the end is just a new beginning. I like that. Thank you for entering my contest.