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~ You Get What You Give ~


~ If-before your-time, in your duty you gave-all of what-goodness you-received, away; then you can-expect what from God yet-again, all the-goodness, you gave,

but-still; beware, so-is-it the-same for-the-way of the latter. ~


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  • piccola silver member
    January 8

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    Something to ponder. Thank you for entering. I wonder how they do a headstone ... do they charge by the word like when they do leather?


  • suseann
    January 7

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    I've a few times seen these quizzical epitaths scribed. And enjoyed the sense of "alive" knowing those past on were real in life. It shows in the quick wit surviving their leaving.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    January 6
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    This is definitely food for thought...good luck in the contest.