Killing In the shadows
the dark, the deep, the dim
Don't you know she's broken
Now bloodlust Is her sin
Void of any meaning,
born with no prayers
Deperate without measure
dead and no one cares
Fill her empty longing
join her In her tomb
Pleading for your life
empty, dead, and blue
As she walks through your blood
still warm from your veins
Laughing at your anguish
while she revels In your pain
You cannot wait to taste her kiss
from lips of crimson red
As you languish In the middle,
not quite living, not quite dead.
Author notes
Picture 4
http://vulsion.deviantart.com/art/MUNCHAUSEN-108540245
A contest entry
- Dark picture prompt by desiredpain.
1075 points, ended January 10, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh My Word~
Holy Mackerel
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Tight rhyme and just Love the tale told also how You took the picture to a whole new level
Excellent this is~
I did not want it to end- just flowed Beautifully~~
Bravo my Friend!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thankyou very much for your very kind comment
As always It's an honor
I wish you all the best and much smiles
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Very dark. Very nicely done. I especially liked the last two lines:
As you languish In the middle,
not quite living, not quite dead.
Great job.
Mike
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Wowzers..you are the queen of dark writes. Brilliantly done my friend.. Best of luck!
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As always you are very kind
I thankyou for your visit and kind words petal
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