Why this?
Why now?
My already broken family
SHATTERED!
Along with the rest of my existance
Locked out of my own house
Staring through the window
Seeing the only thing I truely love
Just beyond my reach
But even that was not enough to chain me.
Author notes
Lost In Dreaming
A contest entry
- "celebrate, celebrate, dance to the music!" round 1 of 4 by iamthebeatles.
650 points, ended February 5, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I love the last line, it a perfect ending, it shows your strength and pride. Wonderful write.
cassie
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You make me want to give you a hug to give you strength. But the last line shows just that...strength. Blessings.
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