See waves foaming, wash the shore.
The castle is there no more.
No windows remain; no door.
Roof of sky; a sandy floor.
Author notes
I wonder if it is possible to translate or paraphrase this in Tagalog with the traditional 7777 syllable count and AAAA rhyme.
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very lovely...I like the imageries...and the rhythm...thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece!
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