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Paradise Rose

The fruit of knowledge was not the lone harvest
when Adam and Eve are cast out of heaven –
a shadow of sorrow  covering her pale chest…

Hidden in her heart, remaining safely unseen
a token from Adam to downy their misfortune
a red blossom picked amid all virgin green…

Thus, the heavenly rose still shines today
in the land inherited by the sons of dirty clay.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 24

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    hehe, wow, this is amazing
    i love the flow, and thought put into this. goodluck and thanks for entering
    Stephanie ♥