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Here without You

Missing image



to you

 

 

my lost love, I must say
the most alive, I have ever been
has been my times
passed with the touch of you... loving me

learning who you are
exploring the depth of our caress
lost in an angel, I can not explane in words
yet feel, like a sky of stars... cascating all around me

then we depart
and your lost to me... once again
and I have no heaven in my life, no angel or friend
Just the memory of holding you tight, one last time, one more goodby

I miss my lost love
my friend



Lee

Author notes

I was married for 26 years
I always feel alone during the holladays

The picture ripped me up, so this is not a verse, just words

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    January 31

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    this is a very beautiful write from you. sadly beautiful. thank you for sharing it with me today, as always. viyanna rosemarie


  • penman gold member
    January 20
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    Wonderful

    So very full of such true and heart felt emotions. Thank you for sharing.


  • michellemybelle gold member
    January 8

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    Hi Rick, you wrote well for the pic. This could be thought of in a few ways, or maybe it is because I know you, but it could be a long distance, a complicated, and or a volital relationship and the burden it plays upon the heart. It seems, love is never easy and is very hard when it goes from all to nothing. I like your comment to Judy, lol, glad you are happy and seem to have it figured out.
    love,
    Michelle


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 11
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      Sweet Michelle


      You do know me well
      I would say all of the above
      and my fealings just amplify the anguish
      Thank you for carring for my words

      Love Rick


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7

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    awwwww, I am sorry that the picture was so heartbreaking for you, yet I am happy that it created such beautiful poetry!
    Ty for entering and touching my heart

    Lynda


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 8
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      Hi Linda


      I have done the come and go thing, a bit too much
      so it kind of lingers with me like that.
      I did love the feelings of the picture, a great choise

      Thank you for saying Beautiful

      Rick


  • Remnant
    January 7

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    Oh the anguise of a loved one, deeply felt when alone looking back on buried memmories
    Courage my friend, hold steadfast
    A fine write


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 7
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      Hi Roker


      Today I am fine and happy
      but I just go thru times when I am depressed.
      Some of it is my mind, some is just the reality of being alone

      Thank you for saying a fine write

      Rick


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 7

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    again you write extreme mental anguish...
    Will you ever learn to be happy? Will anyone learn or is a secret known only to the little gods. I sometimes wonder.
    Good luck in contest


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 8

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      Hi Judy


      I am happy...
      I am only in anguish when I am not happy,
      which are the times when I am in anguish
      so it kind of works out... OK

      Rick


  • Kathrin silver member
    January 7

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    Touching

    The picture also got to me, which one lets go first I wonder, they say when you hug the one you love never be the first to let go. Its heart wrenching no matter how many years go by and my heart goes out to you during such times that you feel empty. Take Care Kathrin xx


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 8
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      Kathyrin


      Very interesting thought on hugging
      I will have to think on that further.

      Thank you for reading me, Rick

  • Chickago66
    January 7

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    i really liked the honesty and imagery present in this piece. i was drawn to the title as well-- holidays suck when you have no one to share them with. the only suggestions i have are correcting a few GUMPS here and there. keep up the great writing!


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 8
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      Chickkago66


      I like what you said about honesty
      I work on humility, because it helps with my honesty
      I wish I knew what GUMPS are, probally spelling in my case

      Thank you for your thoughts

      Rick


  • blueyez
    January 7

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    so sad... the title drew me in because I too have a write entitled...Here without you! holidays can really suck. thank God they're over with!
    Peace and Love


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 8
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      blueyez


      That`s quite the little pucker face
      I like the title because of the song

      Thank you for reading me, Rick


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    January 6

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    do you ever run out of beautifil words. you heart is filled to the rim with beauty.
    I think many could relate to this piece, I once felt the same way. So I know how you feel.
    Outstanding piece, very enjoyable.

    Love you Mr.
    Me ~~~


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 7
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      Hi Joyce


      Thank you my friend
      Nyla is getting cuter each day
      Thank you for liking my words

      Rick

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