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Just Another Pill






I'll pop another pill back to keep my system sane through the starving i'm pushing it through.





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Eating Disorders.
I use caffeine pills to make my body forget what hunger means
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WishMeAway--x

i dont know...honest criticism here.

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  • Tercarro
    January 16, 2009

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    I wish

    I wish you would expand on this because there is much more you could say I'm sure. Go on, give it a try. I like the first lines where is the rest


    • WishMeAway--x
      January 20, 2009
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      If you want to see some expansion read a couple of my eating disorder poems.

      fucking work of art
      forgetting what this means
      she's simply disorders.

      definite explanation there.
      thanks for the comment!
      ♥
      Mollie


  • starving4perfection
    January 12, 2009

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    great! =]
    i just take in caffiene in drink forms like diet red bull and diet pepsi but i just hate all the water wieght it makes me put on..IM GONNA GET CAFFIENE PILLS! =]


    • WishMeAway--x
      January 20, 2009
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      so how are the pills working for you than?
      i ran out the other day...need to get some more...


  • Avalanche.Echo
    January 6, 2009
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    Caffeine pills?
    Damn. Never thought of that.

    • WishMeAway--x
      January 7, 2009
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      It works.


      • Avalanche.Echo
        January 7, 2009

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        Hm...

        I think I'll go without, personally. When I don't feel hungry, I feel kinda worthless.
        ... Which is odd, because I'm not anorexic. Just bulimic.


        • WishMeAway--x
          January 8, 2009
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          I guess we just found out why bulimia and anorexia are so different. I dont eat...you do but than get rid of it as quickly as you took it in.

          i used to never take them but than i lost control and than kind of just started taking them like candy.


          • Avalanche.Echo
            January 10, 2009
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            True... but I eat as little as possible. I haven't purged in about a week, because I've been restricting somewhat.

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