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Touch

Tender is the touch of love

Oh the fit is like a glove
Under-lit by fires burn
Casual brush sparks return
Hope is held in love now earned

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  • Titus gold member
    January 23
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    I like the metaphor of the glove, very grand. Brush sparks as well.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 7
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    Just lovely John!


  • karma-n-peace
    January 6
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    Another masterpiece!
    An abundance of feeling in few words.


  • Sandygram
    January 6

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    So Lovely

    What a beautiful acrostic you have penned. Yes so tender isthe touch of love. love. To be held gently and nurtured so it klast forever. I so enjoyed this my friend. Simply Beautiful. Take care, Blessings and Love, Sandy .