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Dry Bones Dance

Sands of time
trickle through veins
once flowing with life,
supple, pampered skin

    now dry, brittle.

 

Mortal eyes,
closed for eternity,
fail to see
what salvation awaits
after one's image
is immortalized
with precious stones,
bronze,

 

    and gold.


Pompous fanfare
hailed my passing,
treasures and idols
enshrined at my side ~
sealed forever,
with a curse of death
to those who disturb my

    ..."rest."

Now I await
for what seems

many millennia ~

have my gods

forgotten their servant?

 

Ra, I feel not your rays!

Hathor, I hear not your song!

 

While Geb holds me

in his grasp,

and Anubis holds me

from within,

only Seth's dry face

appears before me...

 

    Truly,

    what does await

        once the sands of time

            sift into eternity?

 

Remove these wrappings

that encase my soul!

 

Let these dry bones dance

across barren dunes,

 

    if all that awaits me

 

        ...is dust.

 

 

Author notes

Author: Xianaria

Theme:
The thoughts of a mummified king awaiting the afterlife with his gods.

I pictured images of mummies unburied, as seen on Discovery and such channels, and remembering their dry bones & cracked skin. These people were ritually entombed in preparation for their afterlife, yet their treasures and empty husks still remained after many millennia...

Egyptian gods used:
Ra ~ sun
Hathor ~ music
Geb ~ earth
Anubis ~ embalming
Seth ~ desert

"Dry Bones Dance" gets it's name from Mark Heard's 1990 CD of the same name.

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  • Sarin Rayne
    October 13

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    Very well written and a joy to read tryly.You have added a concept that I was hoping would be in this contest./I thank you for joining and I wish you all the luck in my contest


  • isaacokumu gold member
    June 24

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    wow,

    this is true a master pies of a poem, great imgery and metaphors, cought me emotionaly incline, i love this part. Ra, I feel not your rays!

    Hathor, I hear not your song!



    While Geb holds me

    in his grasp,

    and Anubis holds me

    from within,

    only Seth's dry face

    appears before me...

  • ashjoe76
    March 25
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    Loved how myths could interpretlife situations so well


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    February 19
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    an egyptian delight. thanks for sharing.


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 28
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    congratulations on the gold

    well done indeed!!


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    January 27

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    Supurb

    A perfect entry, with all one could ask for. You made this contest totally worthwhile for me. From the title to final word a winner.Best of luck to you


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 26

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    just stunning

    perfection


    Let these dry bones dance

    across barren dunes,

    if all that awaits me



    ...is dust.


  • Soft-Rain
    January 15

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    This was very well written, a hidden meaning goes deep behind each word!
    You should be very proud of this one.
    Hugs

    ~Lisa~

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