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You Are To Me

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You are..
My stars my moon
My day my night
My heaven my earth
My love my life.

My mind my soul
My flame my fire
My thoughts my dreams
My hearts desire

My spirit my song
My rhyme my verse
My dusk my dawn
My universe

My north my south
My shore my sea
My ocean of love
My destiny.

My summer my spring
My warmth my sun
My everything
My only one…

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  • Eusebius
    September 9

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    oh, this IS so wonderfully poetical! It reads like a lover's incantation! I cannot tell you how splendid I think this is, perfect rhyme and meter. I only wish I had written it. Again, absolutely beautiful and superb!!!


  • In.Your.Arms
    July 4

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    Ilike it...

    hey its darkxoxo(kimber) idk if you remember me, but we used to be friends. anyways, i like this poem a lot because it reminds me of my life a lot. we should talk more often. Peace baby, Kimber <3


  • Sadistic klown girl gold member
    April 29

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    This is a very beautiful write. I enjoyed reading it. My favorite part was

    "My mind my soul
    My flame my fire
    My thoughts my dreams
    My hearts desire"

    This was a very good write. Thank you for sharing this with us. And i will enjoy reading your other poetry.

  • Oceans Whisper
    April 27

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    I must say that the one you write about must be so special. I love the way you wrote this. I can't wait to read more of your work. I think I am hooked.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 6

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    that is an awful lot of things to be. i would say someone has certainly won your heart. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie


  • Angelflower
    January 13

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    This was really beautiful!!! you did a wonderful job in expressing so much with your words I really loved it, thank you very much for sharing, best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Dragon Of Darkness
    January 12
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    wow beautifull


  • Kathrin silver member
    January 7
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    gorgeous

    what a beautiful piece of writing, this is perfect and refreshing to read. Take care kathrin x


  • echo-ink
    January 7

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    Awesome job picking all the words and feelings for this poem.
    The rhyme was fantastic, and the choice of words to descibe your love was amazing.
    I really enjoyed this.
    Lovely


  • PerpetualNight
    January 7

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    God this reminds me of how I feel for my boyfriend. He means everything to me. you did an amazing job! It states everything so simply and yet it flows with the most elegance that a poem can. Truly amazing. Great job.


  • solidforever
    January 7
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    This was my first to read on this sight was taken away so beautiful. It was very nice to read.

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 6
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    Wow

    One of the most beautiful I have read in recent times. Beautifully penned.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 6

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    wow this beautiful a wonderful take onthe promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 6
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    AWESOME!!

    A TOP FAVORITE! wow this is beautiful lady..gosh such a powerful full of love piece! wow..

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