one wants good the other evil ways.
The fight amongst them never ending you see,
for they both were derived through love indeed.
Some are given such love where others are left behind,
to live within a form of hell before their time.
Lead by those who lives by God or the Devils ways,
has brought this child into this world where pain is displayed.
The souls in time through eyes of love and hate,
brings forth the division through heaven gate.
To evil they care not if another loses as they reign
yet with goodness they share so both will gain.
Face to face we see this every day,
the good one lives in Gods image
the other so lost in his own wake.
The battle rages and words are shared indeed,
both wanting nothing more than the lead.
God praise the for a blessing to make this man pure,
The Devil screams I will reign this you can be sure.
God how can one reign when he kills those near,
The Devil replies I do this to make them fear.
God fear what, that you will take of their life!
The Devil I make them fear me and what is this you call life.
God It is a promise given for life in eternity.
The Devil with me so shall it be.
God oh but yours comes with everlasting pain.
The Devil replied I like insane.
God yes this I see and such power ends in time,
The Devil I will take them all and fire shoots from his eyes.
God in time will they choose to be loved a place of peace,
The Devil in hell we have no need.
God it will be life in pain and flames,
The Devil laughing replies there will be death and raping and again and again.
God for those who refuses me lives a life of sorrows and pain,
The Devil those who eccepts him finds no excitement in the plan.
God oh but I have more for with out harm they live in heaven above,
The Devil explodes with furry and cries out who needs love.
Author notes
Interesting contest tell me how do you feel it would be played out what do you think they would say if they came face to face . Just as we do today if you brought someone that was a believer in God and one who has lived his or her life in sin their conversation would be somewhat the same. One who has known love and one who has only felt pain all their life who chose this life for them for the child has no say so does this battle be played out every day
A contest entry
- You come across Satan and God having a conversation by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended January 20, 13 entries
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interesting way you wrote this one. You might want to check your grammar here. I believe you might have some wrong words... except.. I believe should be accept. Stuff like that.
My opinion on this contest would be interesting I think. You see I think of God and Satan on equal terms just seeing things in different lights. Light one seeing the glass half full while the other seeing it half empty. Know what I mean.
I too thought it would be an interesting contest.
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Yes you gave point and the ultimate battle with a forceful victory words from God of course. Blessings.


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Brilliant, another excellent write. Very creative take on the prompt.


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Wonderful
A great creation. So wonderfully creative. Best of luck in the contest.

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a brilliant take on the promt patty you have resinated the reality of gods good and the devils evil perfectly good luck inthe contest
maralisa


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awewsome! You have portrayed the battle between good and evil excellently!
Much happiness!
becca


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It's scary thinking that our lives lay in the balance between good and evil.. and we're not sure which way that see-saw will tip?
this is very good!
laurie


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neat. I like how you have done this,
Best of wishes.










