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Returning Power to Yourself




At this time,
at this place
there exists a pinching disconnectedness
caused by your midnight insecurities
So, when caught between a rock and a hard place,
flesh grates sandpaper,
sandpaper grates flesh,
making my naked ego
Tender
And
Raw
But my convoluted nerves don’t give in and
I fail to respond appropriately
(appropriately for how you wish:
hurt)
This is it.
I am deleting your spam
and finally standing up for myself




Author notes

I find it extremely important for everyone to be able to stand up for themselves, especially the ladies. Please allow yourselves to do so because you're worth more than someone else's insecurities.

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  • Lady Altheia
    January 9

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    Agreed, standing up for yourself is important. We are not dumping grounds for other's insecurities. Thank you for sharing your petry with me.


  • thejollytinker
    January 7

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    I love your use of language- perfect, impeccable! It's hard to write one that filled with emotion and keep it grammatically (case-in-point) correct. I stand impressed, thank you! G


    • punksense
      January 8
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      Thejollytinker, thank you for thinking so highly of language usage! I appreciate your kind words!

      Jen >_<