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God And Satan Converse In Mono Rhyme

Satan:

"I question my existence
within this coexistence."

God:

"Evil is natural resistance
and curiosity's persistence."

Satan:

"Perhaps there is no distance?"

God:

"Creation requires assistance."

Satan:

"So then life is insistence?"

God:

"Nothing comes from pure consistence."
 
 



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  • trekkergirl
    January 18

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    Very well done.  Very creative.  Definitely a conversation that I am sure God and Satan have had several times.  You did well.  I am very impressed.


  • Denerica
    January 14
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    Intelligent convo...God always has the last word. Blessings.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 7

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    awesome marky, this is sooo true very creative, doubt I could do anything in monorhyme. I suck at it lol.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 7

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    Wowzy I can see that conversation happening too lol ... cool!!


  • januaryrain gold member
    January 6
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    Very creative, I could see this happening.
    Well done.


  • penman gold member
    January 6
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    Excellent

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Asphyxiated
    January 6
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    This was really a pleasure to read! Best of luck to you!


  • maralisa silver member
    January 6
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    a wonderful poem good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 6

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    This has been well-crafted in mono-rhyme.



  • Carolina Moon gold member
    January 6

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    I applaud that talent of yours! Beautifully done as always. Knock em dead bro hehe Great write!


  • LAPoe gold member
    January 6

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    Lord this is lovely!!!!! High Praise for you!!!!

    laurie

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