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Lover's Rain

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Lover’s Rain

 

As heaven bestows breath beneath angels’ wings,

two share devotion, compassion, and song,

as arms stretch forth in circular motion, sensual, passionate and strong.

 

As a door swivels on a hinge both ways,

heartstrings strum to swinging hymns.

Golden memories of yesterdays, shelter our souls within.

 

We thirst no more for faith and justice,

we find them within our hands.

How ever hard the rain may pour, our love will forever withstand.

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Love picture - couple hugging in the rain,

by orangeacid.. obtained from http://www.lovepicturesoflove.net/

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  • Soft-Rain
    October 11

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    Still so love this one!
    Such beauty you show in your writings.
    I think it is most certainly a Poetic Treasure

    s
    ~Lisa~


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    August 26

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    A very beautiful and passionate write...sighs..
    Young love can be so grand..
    Many blessings
    Asdzaa~


  • lifereaper
    July 2
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    very pssionately written,hope to find that someday.


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    June 24

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    lover's rain, how lovely and perfect and wonderful....the last stanza is my favorite, but I adore this story and passion!


  • MoonStarRaven silver member
    May 9

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    awww this is SO beautiful the imagery is just amazing I love the heartfelt emotions in this piece! what a wonderful love poem


  • Ez Writer silver member
    January 20
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    Bravo ! A mesmerizing poem ,splendidly written !!
    Best regards my friend ! Easy


  • couldbeworse
    January 14

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    beautiful, inspirational write.
    fav:
    We thirst no more for faith and justice,

    we find them within our hands.

    How ever hard the rain may pour, our love will forever withstand


  • teen poeticsoul
    January 14

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    Two thumbs up

    This is so beautiful. The best kisses in the world are in the rain! It was very sensual and and innocent all at the same time. This was an awesome write all together.


  • Darkend
    January 14

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    I don't quite have words for this poem. It was very sensual and sweet. Breathtaking is a good word for it. I don't think it was too long or too short. It was just a very beautiful work of art to express the feelings that two people share when in love. Its a very inspiring piece. Well done.

  • PointShoesAndPoetry
    January 11

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    This is a beautiful piece. I absolutely love the imagery in this. I loved the lines : "As a door swivels on a hinge both ways, heartstrings strum to swinging hymns" Wonderful job!!


  • Violinstrings silver member
    January 11
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    this is great

    sorry you did not win
    it is short and beautiful


  • darkstinger
    January 11

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    Poet, great write man. Just like most all of your work. The picture goes with all the feels you describe. Thanks for sharing.

    Ray

  • tara wilson gold member
    January 10

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    this is very sweet, Tim, i've read this one a few times now and i really love the rhyme/meter, a pleasure, this is beautiful, and i love the title


  • Introvert2006
    January 8
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    Beautifully Captured!

    Well Done My Friend!


  • PurpleSky
    January 8
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    Keep going and give that delany a run for their money! lol litterally


  • whitenoise
    January 8

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    very nice read full of the love we want or for some have , nice description in the words a nice smooth flow and short and to the point just the way i like them, i especially liked the line
    "heartstrings strum to swinging hymns"
    well done xx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 8

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    Lovely and romantic! Just the way we all wish love to be!


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7

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    this is gorgeous...I love every line...
    Passion igniotes this beautiful piece and every line sparkles with love's light...
    TY for entering!

    Lynda


  • Mariana gold member
    January 7

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    Your beauty shines through your words. So heartfelt and melodious. I think this is wonderful! Well done

    Mariana


  • Ms2real
    January 7

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    hey brother tim!
    been a long time.... love the picture u used ; )
    that is a beautiful poem as all of your work. i tried to click on the link to get your book but it said the page was disabled....whats up with that?
    oh and before i go i wanted to just say my favorite line is the sixth line.... absolutely beautiful....
    love always -Vanity


  • weaverwonderland
    January 7

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    Expression Of Love!!!!

    This an fine expression of the strength that love gives. I love the line, How ever hard the rain may pour, our love will forever withstand. Beautiful!!
    Dad @ Mom
    xoxoxo

  • femurlee
    January 7

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    Wonderful!

    The emotion and sentiments were excellent. Check out my poem "When It's Real." It was inspired by Bella and Edward of the "Twilight" series. Peace.


  • Kalexi
    January 7
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    Beautiful,Timothy, you know I love angels, and the rain.

    love ya
    Karen


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 7

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    Beautiful

    I don't like mushy writing anymore ands I really hate penning mushy stuff too. I do like your flow and contrast to tis write bro but furthermore I really enjoy the over all point to this write and that last line is simply divine any ways a brilliant contest my Aunt Lynda is hosting and this is truly a unique entrty for her contest. keep up the good work and good luck with the contest


  • second-born
    January 7

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    so beautiful...rain always makes a love poem lovely but your piece is lovelier than any poem with its sincere emotions and fantastic imageries...

  • weaverwonderland
    January 7
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    Lovely...

    I like how you're mixing your style up son, I noticed that, and I have to say I really like it! You know I'm so proud of you, and I can't wait till your next book, though the first one I'm still enjoying!

    Love Mom and Dad. XO


  • Whoochi gold member
    January 6

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    Sweet!

    And I don't mean sappy sweet, I mean awesome sweeeettttt! I have a whole new outlook on rain now....the best lines "As a door swivels on a hinge both ways,

    heartstrings strum to swinging hymns.

    Golden memories of yesterdays, shelter our souls within." So comforting!!!!! Well done! Love the title!

  • thunderingpanther
    January 6

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    beautifully written...left me thinking wouldn't it be great if everyone could find the many different levels of love that are reached when one has true faith in it, no matter what they have been through before they believe that true love is real and it stands the test of time over many seasons of change and growth. thank you for sharing


  • Greenhorn
    January 6

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    This is a very tender write, well-written. The title was good. My favorite stanza was most likely the second, probably because of 'golden memories of yesterdays.' Yesterday always seems so much better... A lot of feeling is in this piece. Good luck in the contest.


  • Trupoet
    January 6

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    Ah!!! a wonderful write my sweet Tim. You always bring joy and sweetness to your reader's,i love the way you gather your words into a beautiful prose.

    God bless

  • michaeline
    January 6

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    This is very well written.Well thought out.the title was a good choice and the flow was continual.Liked the subject that you chose.Good luck in the contest hope you win.


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 6

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    tears rain strong from your words of loves heartfelt wonders. through the hands of time and weathered storms love can withstand all obstacles faced with compassion trust and faithand with that the rainbows of hope shall enblazon through the cloudiest of storms. well done and many blessings with love always xxxxxxx Love Star xxx


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 6

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    BEAUTIFUL

    true love can always stand the pressures and the hands of time...you have taken this sweet picture and given it life...winner for sure my sweet pet

     

    blessing, love and love to you dear heart

  • LovingPhoenix
    January 6
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    Beautifully written, you can wrap your mind around it on different levels!

  • PurpleSky
    January 6

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    God how beautiful love truely is....You have described just that here in this most precious write I loved this piece just as I love all your work
    love ya
    ~Lena~


  • poeticpieces
    January 6

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    I Love This Dad!

    You are simply amazing, and all you share here flows like a river. Love the rush, and keep on sharing your wonderful heart.

    Love Your Son, Tim Jr.


  • Ephiphany
    January 6

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    OMG

    this is absolutely Beautiful my brother I love everything about this, good luck, and thanks for always continueing to share the beauty of your passion in spilled ink.

    Take care
    Ephiphany


  • poetryrocksmysox
    January 6

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    Beautiful,

    Your words do wonders, I love this prompt picture!
    You did an excellent job with expressing yourself.
    Your feelings are so lovely when you expose them.
    Another work I find so moving and romantic.

    K.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 6

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    Beautifully written as always!
    A lot of heart and passion you put into
    this write. All the best to you bro and
    take care! Good luck in this contest
    and thanks a lot for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • esroddo silver member
    January 6

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    Wow your words left me speechless

    Beautiful write as always I feel in love with your words Blessing and good luck in the contest my friend always a pleasure to read your work LISA


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 6
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    Beautifully penned as always bro.

    Hope you had great holidays.

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