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Re: too late! by lovemedeath

 

Roses are red
  but won't grow if there is always rain.

 

How selfish to force someone to continue to play,
  when the game of life causes so much pain.

 

 

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ScreaminMime
Prompt #1

A contest entry

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  • The Devil18
    October 16
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    this is good


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 7

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    Short but effective! Great take on the prompt, love the simplicity, yet deep meaning, behind it. Good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    January 6
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    The truth shall set us free...