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Be My Waterfall

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Oh my darling
the one who is the shower on my heart,
come and cascade love’s waterfall
across my sorrow stained soul.

Let the droplets from you lips
bathe me forever in passion’s rinse,
for I am so soiled with sadness,
so utterly covered in loneliness,
which only your sweet liquid
flowing from a golden caring fount
that pours out of your angel spirit
can ever cleanse
with such healing nectar
all the wounds of my bleeding life.

Grant me mercy of purifying pleasure 
only your soft and soothing stream
of caresses can bring,
then we shall swim together,
across a sea of writhing touches,
happily sailing a tsunami in seductions,
adrift where only lover’s float,
landing upon that isle
where we shall write a song
gushing in a river of succulent embraces,
baptized in the immersion
making our two bodies
a single crashing wave of ecstasy.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 24

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    this is wonderful papa, i really enjoyed this alot. he had both feelings and descriptions! good luck and thanks for entering
    Stephanie ♥


  • queenie
    January 8

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    your words have done a great justice to that lovely image. as you read you see the words come to life and mingle with the waterfall. you have no only written words you brought them to life. very well done and my best to you in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 6

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    aw wow this so beautiful I love your imagery from stanza one through to the last good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • StarEyes
    January 6

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    SIGH!!!

    Oh my dear Brother,

    This is has a HUGE sigh factor to it! Your images paint the most romantic picture in my mind... Of dreams shared, and a love that is undying! What a wonderful read!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 6

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    Sensational!

    I love this here from you and enjoyed the read! This has alot of emotion that carries through this write. Great job here and good luck to you in the contest hon

    Grant me mercy of purifying pleasure
    only your soft and soothing stream
    of caresses can bring,
    then we shall swim together,
    across a sea of writhing touches,
    happily sailing a tsunami in seductions,
    adrift where only lover’s float,
    landing upon that isle

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