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My Morbid Death

I'm coming to the face of darkness
But I don't scream in fear
I look into the eyes of evil
I see in my nightmares

My face will never cringe away
My heart will never speed
As I listen to his deadly voice
Speak lightly of his deeds

I don't care he has a dog
That speaks with three large heads
I don't care that he has bones
Coming from underneath his bed

He can eat kids and puppies
And I still won't really care
There's nothing in the whole wide world
That will make me want fear

I'll never hate the things he did
Or what he has not done
For everything I've told of him
Is what I will become

This horrid creature who shows no pain
Of anything he did
This fleeting image of a god
Who acts as if a kid

I hold him dearly to my heart
And will never ever remorse
For choosing him above all others
Is my one and only course

I cannot wait until the day
I take my final breath
Then I'll forever have the chance
To love my morbid death
~Kay~

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  • Good;; didn't quite make me feel pain or cry, but still a good dark write. Thanks for entering.


  • Violent Glass
    February 2

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    wow very dark and cold
    i loved it
    it was really good
    so... well cold and emotionless
    but still so full of it
    anyway thanx for sharing

  • piccola silver member
    January 18
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    good dark write. thank you for entering.

  • This was a really good one Anime, still dark >.< like always, but i really did like it.

    My favorite line was...

    This fleeting image of a god
    Who acts as if a kid


  • Rhapsody
    January 6
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    this is awesome!!!

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