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Plod

Plod ___ the old men
Trying to stride
Their steps now half and halt
Burdened by the faults
Of uneven streets
Always grading up

Plod ___ a step
Another tired stair tread climbed
Beyond where they should have stayed
To let the world pass them by

Plod ___
Sometime, they rest
To reflect the remains of yesterdays
Only the face of strangers change

Plod ___
What do they hope to find?
Around the corner / down the street
A friendly smile in those they meet?
Or perhaps proof  exists...

GOD ___ or some other curiosity·

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  • afroqban
    January 28

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    "Plod ___
    Sometime . . . we rest
    To reflect the remains of yesterdays
    Only the face of strangers change" that was my fav. something about the way you worded that stuck with me


  • IronIcecream
    January 17

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    the highest wisdom isn't kindness but understanding
    without understanding kindness is a tyrant
    and good intentions become hell

  • unraveled
    January 6

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    i love this...
    its simplicity and candor make it an easy read, but the ideas and images create enough mystery that i am really quite drawn into this...

    this is just beautifully done.-cassidy