Iridescent depth
Shimmering undulation
Beauty unbridled
© copyright 2009 paula dagnel
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A contest entry
- Ocean Haiku poems for Chocolate-eating Peg-leg Pirate Group by Blossom Fairy.
750 points, ended January 6, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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YES! The ocean, sea, a lake with the wind at its back is all of the elation you mentioned in this splendidly written haiku. When I first learned to write poetry, some 40 years ago, I was introduced to haiku. Other than being written with no capital letters, yours is one of the most descriptive I have read in some time.
CONGRATULATIONS on a well earned Silver Chalice dear sister. I am such a fan of the water! It always soothes my spirit, as does your wonderful work of brevity written on this page. You make "Blue" very peaceful!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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I would say that you took that pic and ran with it, with this poem. Great work and I saw that you took second that is nice to place. Thank you for reading my poem, and the kind words you left on it.You have helped me with my prob a lot. I really enjoyed this poem SH.
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ah the beauty we find in life, it jumps into eyes with a smile and a cry-sigh and all we can do is jump and dance poetry in appreciation - hi there, nice to see you pop up in my work
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First, let me say that it is good to see your pen filled with ink again. I pray that you are well and forging ahead in life.
It always amazes me the depth someone (a good poet) can put into so few words. You have accomplished GOLD with this superb work of poetry. Your language usage is astute, and the imagery stunning!
Congratulations on your win. I love the cool of "blue"!
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Imagine meeting you here...lol. Congratulations on the silver trophy. It's been a long, long time since I've had the pleasure of reading any of your work. I hope your doing well.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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what can I say?
You amaze me. This is a lovely write. I am so happy that you are posting here again. Your words (and you) have been missed greatly.
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you penned a beautiful haiku! i love to write this unique form, and also i love to read haiku poems... beautiful and tranquil kind of feeling. thanks for sharing and congratulations on winning a silver trophy. =)
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my favorite color. you are my shero. a few words and there your brillance sail through so easily. you do what you do best and that is to make words come to life.you will forever be on my favorite list as a poetess and as a friend.
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smiling
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Happy Holidays Paula
Is it true that haiku is what Japanese turtle-doves do?
hai-coo!LOL
Long time no see! Hope you've been well.
I like this haiku! Nice trophy as well!
John-Nevada USA
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A well deserved silver indeed. its been a long time. Glad to see you writing! This made me think of the ocean in Mexico.The moon hanging full over the ocean and silver phosphorescence shimmering through the waves. Thank you so much for the walk down memory lane. Hope to hear more of you soon.
Michelle
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You've taken this color to a new dimension-nicely done!
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UUUUUUUuummmmmmmmmmmmmmm!! I like this haiku so MUCH... it is smart and very exciting. Thank you for coming to our contest!
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