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Fire And Ice

What happens when fire and ice mix?
Which one is extinguished,
Is it both of us who have, taken the path of love,
Cuz I melt when I touch you,
And my walls breakdown,
This is the start of an emotional meltdown.

Is it both os us,
Who have had to sacrifice,
To stop a collision of fire and ice.

The word forever,
Melts down my walls,
Am I just setting myself,
Up for a fall.

I've started to trust,
And started to believe,
That underneath my icy exterior,
You can see,
Something beautiful,
Inside of me.

So What happens when fire and ice mix,
Which one is extinguished?

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  • daftmullet
    February 25
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    u get water
    with ice if ur lucky

  • I don't know what happens but this poem is beautifully written and very symbolic.