I'm excited when I hear you're coming
I'm happy when you get here
I have fun with you during your stay
But then I think about when you're leaving
From that time on I can't enjoy it
The day you leave comes so fast
And when I see you pull away
I cry and cry and cry some more
I really want to end it
End the misery
You say you'll be back soon
And that the time will fly
But you don't know how bad I feel
And how much I want to die
Please just get here and stay forever
Please...
I can't take this pain anymore
What did you think
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its good
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My family is all broken apart too. no one cares about each other and im not related to any of them...literally. but overall verry good write, loved how your true thoughts and feelings shone through it
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Great (:
Wow I can relate to this so much!..It reminds me of something i would write, Great poem,
I think you have talent!
Keep the pen going.
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I like this one it is really touching
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i can truly relate to this
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ahh its grt
i luv it its the same as wut i almost think -
I can relate to this poem, I never had my dad in my life, and I use to feel this way when he left. Very heartfelt
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