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Stolen Moments

Stolen moments lost in the rain
  Dreams that can never be

Memories to haunt our lives
Times that we will never see

Whispers to echo on with time
Words spoken for none to hear

The parting that had to come
The last time to draw near

So hold this moment deep within
To hide in the darkest place

One more kiss lost in the rain
Mixing with tears upon your face

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7

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    Beautiful!
    Lovely rhyme penned in bittersweet loving words...TY for entering this gorgeous piece

    Lynda


  • karma-n-peace
    January 6

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    You weave such beauty in your words John, the most touching poetry I have ever had the good fortune to read.
    XoXoXo


  • Melodies
    January 6

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    Ahhhh... I love a love poem so much and this one is beautiful and sweet and I wish for future happy endings.


  • Sandygram
    January 6
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    Beautiful Poem

    Your lovely and heartfelt words whisper and echo such sadness and tenderness of that last embrace and kiss. A very emotional write for the reader to get lost in. To many lonely hearts longing to never be apart. Thank you for sharing. You captured the emotion of the picture so well. Best of luck.

    You take care my friend. Sharing hugs and smiles with you. God Bless You. Sandy