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Sunshine in the Rain

When I met you in the street
The rain was bouncing round my feet
You embraced me with a smile
I felt those feelings all the while

The ones you get when heart is racing
And sensations interlacing
Over the moon, walking on air
Bouncing, flying, not a care

Now I cannot let you go
And my being loves you so
You fill my heart with warmth and sun
Though down the hill the rain doth run

My heart is souring, reaching high
I want to shout the reason why
Though it’s raining I feel dry
I look at you and breathe a sigh

J Lloyd




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  • judmc
    February 6

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    Enjoyable

    A nice descriptive poem some lovely imagery intermingled
    with a heartfelt time honoured passionate longing for
    romance .Good Luck in the contest .....George......

  • johnrich998
    January 8
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    quite a romantic poem brings out the feelings in your sou


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7

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    WOnderful rhyme and flow! Such a romantic piece inspired by a picture of the same...
    TY for entering!

    Lynda