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Don't Go

Don’t go
Without you
I am lost.

Hold me closer,
Don’t let me go.
It’s tearing me apart.

Dance with me in
springtime rain,
remind me of our love.

If you must go
I’ll wait for you
Till the day that you return…….

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7

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    This is gorgeous!
    Such a beautiful expression of love and longing...
    Lovely ! ty for entering

    Lynda


  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 6

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    awww...this is lovely, i like the end, where you will wait..cutesy. good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥