Ideas are lingering in my mind,
Refusing to be shared with other,
Refusing to share themselves to me.
Putting words to my state of mind,
Is like spinning around and round,
Awaiting the wheel to stop.
Flower patterns covering my eyes,
Dancing as in a tease or salute,
To what I can not yet see.
Who's here, I can feel your breath.
Leave me alone or I will scream,
Stop trying to enter my mind.
...Its confused enough already
Author notes
Seriously, I am in a weird mood.
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A contest entry
- Poetry! by luna-midnight.
1800 points, ended January 24, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hey this is good. Had to laugh at the ending... I understand all about being confused. My mind pretty much stays that way.
Glad to see you writing.
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this is really cool, and deep, hahaha. i love the last two lines. amazing! good luck, thanks for entering
Stephanie ♥ -
Oo I really like the deep emotional and intriguing feel of this peice. The imagery is well done, and the last line comes quite abruptly, but it fits very well and flows nicely
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