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On Rivers and Things

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On Rivers and Things

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When your river floods

with fish

or garden swells,

it is morning's eyes that see

the hungry.

 

No winged raven, preacher,

preening before reflections

in mirrors, in books

may raise that sun,

adorn the earth

with dew.

 

Renewal resides in a smile

on the face

of tomorrow's children

and when the rain

dimples the pond

with circles that

spread forever,

 

I hear them giggle.

 

If your glass is half full

share it with a thirsty

stranger and you

will be quenched,

sated and smiling

like you learned

a secret.

 

Sharing it is like rain

on your river

on a brand new

morning.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • maa gold member
    January 13

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    absolutely amazing ...
    the first stanza already filled me with awe :

    "When your river floods
    with fish
    or garden swells,
    it is morning's eyes that see
    the hungry."

    these are words that deserve to be immortalized and be transmitted onto future generations ...
    so much wisdom, so much compassion in these few simple words ... I am speechless ...

    and the whole poem from the beginning to the end, is one flowing river of blessings and spiritual abundance bestowed upon us ...
    yes, dalaney is right : this is what I would call a perfect entry ... (although I consider each entry as perfect, since they all spring from perfect hearts, and I honor and love them all) ...

    maybe it is more appropriate to say that your verse resonates very much with what I would call my inner sense of truth ... it just pushes the right buttons ...

    and the last stanza just hit the target :

    "Sharing it is like rain
    on your river
    on a brand new
    morning."

    what an amazing image, just breathtaking ...
    thank you so much for this masterpiece shared ...

    maa


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 6

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    I think this is exactly what
    the host would call a perfect entry.
    Your writing here is simply lovely.

    Lane


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 6

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    As always...


    Beautifully penned, dear Scribe...I won't even try to quote the lines that moved me the most, my Friend...They ALL did. I've always considered my glass to be overflowing. (In fact, for awhile, my AP motto was "A glass full of feathers", referencing Emily Dickinson's poem about Hope, of course). For those who thought theirs to be "half~empty", I'd suggest getting a smaller glass. Contentment is something you attain by choice; happiness & sorrow are fleeting. Good luck in Marion's contest, Sweetness. Sweet Pea