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Lush Life 2 - The bathroom

Serene beats of water drops
isolating, often thought provoking:
an ornamented recluse of meditative charm
drawing life's hustles to a close
as aloe vera and lacquer cases
traps us into Reflection's world
and insects' hymns transforms:
annoying rages turned exotic songs

                      ***

White cubicles and grandmother's necklaces
slowly lures memories' invasion -
For in the realm of bathrooms:
cities of lost transportation and pressing deadlines
vanishes
while ancient tales float
as tranquility and thought surge

Author notes

Please see Lush Life 1 for my newly revamped project, basically I have decided to craft more tranquil and heartwarming poetry due to the many things that happened to all of us in 2008, and also to experiment with a new poetic approach.

As a Japanese architect described toilets as a "place of serenity and place to think" - I hope you can bear with me on the beautification and alternative perspective of a bathroom/toilet.

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