Dance upon ceiling
illuminating rafters
sunlight from the old bucket
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The early Spring sun
melts away the Winters ice
freeing the water again
Andrew Hide
13~02~2004
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Written February 13th, 2004
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Leaking ceilings need buckets forsure!!
but what do you when your boots leak??? KEEP ON DANCING, I SAY 
~GILL~xxx -
Wonderful work, and serendipity, too! Loved the picture ... loved the way in which sunlight not only MELT the snow, but also used the water as prism to dance upon your ceiling!
Poet par excellence, that you are, for noticing the small wonders of joy ...
Happy Valentine's Day, Andrew
Myra -
Interesting illumination with this my friend!
I can the images that you portray!
I did enjoy this very much!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill -
excellent !!!
Your sedoka sings of old and new ..A changing of day to night and back again ..Spring is getting close to earth ..Thanks for the read ~ Skinwalker -
Just that image so well known but stilled here like a photo, and on the same time vivid. I remember me taken photo's just to catch that lite to create this same effect.
Sorry that I laughed about the first comment here. -
It certainly does, I was trying to write something else, but kept being distracted by a dancing light on my ceiling. It was the sun reflecting through my window from an old bucket, outside full of water. The last time I looked at it, it was covered in ice.
Andrew -
What a fun image, kind of lke the sin playing of your watch dial in school. You see which of your friends you can flash. This being a little more random. If you tap the bucket does it dance more??? Susan
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very good
Most enjoyable. With spring just around the corner and the sunlight reflecting once again upon the waters surface, your poem brings the joy of a new season to heart.
Well done.
John -
Thankyou for reading CrAzyDrPePPeR26,
It's a sedoka, nothing hidden, just exactly as it is. A moments vision.
Andrew -
ARG, Another peom that I dont understand that doesnt have an author description. How are people suposed to be able to read your pieces if you dont let us know what they are about or fill us in. I can even say if I like this peom or not cause I dont knwo what it is about and stuff. I feel like there is so much missing but I can tell that there is some kind of story behind it by the way it is written.
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