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the rose after 12 #3

in the mist of the fog and  in the blackness of the night
hard to identify the lonely slovenly figure
her shadow is reflected by the moon
she places a rose after twelve

the silk of blackness she wears
the room filled with her smell
every night i wait and stay put to watch her twirl into the mid of night
she places a rose after twelve

again i stand here waiting to see her come
but my mind wonders with terror fear
i can't smell that scent from the distance
i can't hear her breaths its exactly twelve and she has never been late before
i walk slowly into the moon light and see no rose

i swiftly walk away with grieve
....but  my love of darkness in the moonlight never had ended for her

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 6
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    "she places a rose after twelve" great write...I really like it


  • desiredpain
    January 6
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    Please put your option number in your Author's Notes. Thanks.