I fought the fight ,
I fought the fight for you on this and every night.
I stretched the rules ,
I sacrificed dear friends for you , yes I'm a fool.
And here I sit , covered in rags and bites and shit.
I fought the fight,
I was lost the very first time I felt your bite.
I screamed and feared what demons could bring such delight.
And here I sit I hate the love you give , every part of it.
Oh let me sleep ,
let me dream of life before we met
Oh let me dream ,
let me feel my life has no regrets.
My time has come ,
I hear the coach on cobbles head my way.
I know its near ,
before it goes the dank dark smell of fear.
And here I sit ,
you laugh as my tears fall into the hellish pit.
Now let me sleep ,
the Coachmen raise me up into their keep.
Now let me dream ,
let the cobbles send me to my sleep serene.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ohhh. Other than what I've told you on msn this is pretty decent. I would probably revise the "come my way" part in the 2nd last stanza but other than that. Good write.
keep it up
Claire-Anne

