Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

let me sleep

I fought the fight ,
I fought the fight for you  on this and every night.

I stretched the rules ,
I sacrificed dear friends for you , yes I'm a fool.

And here I sit , covered in rags and bites and shit.

I fought the fight,
I was lost the very first time I felt your bite.

I screamed and feared what demons could bring such delight.

And here I sit  I hate the love you give , every part of it.

Oh let me sleep ,
let me  dream of life before we met

Oh let me dream ,
let me feel my life has no regrets.

My time has come ,
I hear the coach on cobbles head my way.

I know its near ,
before it goes the dank dark smell of fear.

And here I sit ,
you laugh as my tears fall into the hellish pit.

Now let me sleep ,
the Coachmen raise me up into their keep.

Now let me dream ,
let the cobbles send me to my sleep serene.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Ravenblood
    January 6

    Edit | Reply
    Ohhh. Other than what I've told you on msn this is pretty decent. I would probably revise the "come my way" part in the 2nd last stanza but other than that. Good write.

    keep it up


    Claire-Anne