Today we'll make life's pledge of unity
Our future together begins anew
My heart you have conquered, you have the key
As we journey life's paths dreams we pursue.
Our lives together are just beginning
The hurdles many, yet our bonds are strong
As this day unfolds my heart is spinning
Yet both us chosen where we belong.
And so I wait as butterflies flutter
In brief expectation you may not show
I await, those special vows to utter
Fine threads of a tapestry we shall sew.
In tentative steps I become your bride
I am blessed by angels deep down inside
Author notes
2. Anticipation
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A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.
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A contest entry
- Pictures And Quotes Prompts by Sandygram.
1800 points, ended January 7, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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a good formed poem - yay! that means there is going to be cake. wedding cake, and booze! sounds good to me, a toast to the bride and doom, i mean groom.
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The narrator has taken the reader through images time designates for a couple where one life ends and two join to carry a joy filling each. The form compliments the nature of the poem. This is clear well defined and moving. Thank you for your entry in our contest. Good to you
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What a lovely sonnet you have writen. The imagery is terrific and I love the rhyme and flow. A delight to read this morning. Thank you for entering our contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy
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It's not often I see you write lovey dovey poem like this but I think you should do more.
Lovely work here, all the best to you
Ken
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Perhaps poet
Like the song...We've only just begun, tghis dream can come true. Always a pleasure to read your fine words.
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Excellent
Wow, you are such a master at sonnets. This was terrific. Best of luck in the contest.
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