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Karchterner Caverns, Arizona

calcite love
the formations
layer by later
soda straws
turned to stalagcites

this is how i love you
one drop of water
at a time.

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  • onerios13
    June 10
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    Sigh. "one drop of water at a time"...that was just a line I wanted to sink and disappear into. I have missed reading you, brilliant woman. But I was in need of inspiration and of course I naturally headed over to your page. As always, I leave euphoric.

    Write more, dammit.