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Still remembering

Still remembering...
Two dark brown coffee mugs
Choclate cookies
And your talks

Still remembering...
Rainy nights
Wet emotions
Pain dipped songs

Still remembering...
Long walks
As sunlight died
With fingers locked

Still remebering...
Winter mornings
And on your face
Dew drops danced

Still remembering...
I lost you
As footprints get lost
In ocean's sand

Still remembering...you!

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Swati Sharma
Prompt: still remembering...

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  • kitsmith
    February 1

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    Gotta love how those memories never go away...no matter how long it's been or how badly we want them to.

    Thank you.