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This Day

Why should your soul be fettered
with crass guards
and speculation?

The dishes will be there tomorrow -
just walk.

In reality,
it is cheer that pays the bills;
employers don't care why you're enthustiastic!

Time kills its pupils anyway
so make a new story.

Take the wealth
of this day.

Author notes

5.Trust that little voice in your head that says "Wouldn't it be interesting if..."; And then do it (Duane Michals).

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  • kendhal22
    January 7, 2009

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    Excellent

    This is exactly what I'm looking in the quote, for interperation in your own words into a poetic way, but keeping the quote in mind. Thank you for coming to my contest. Kendhal22