Down the halls of veins
Travels the blood carrying sevent
Who takes each word and locks them
Behind a cabinet in her heart
Left to feaster
Poisoning on every cruel thing
Said until her mind
Is as damaged as her soul
And yet the words
Those remain unspoken
Are worse then the ones left
Author notes
i havent written for a very long time hope this dosnt compelty suck
quote for the promt was
“And sometimes hurt is not of the body.
More often it is words, or lack thereof. A lack of words.
The cruelty of silence.”
— Unknown.
In a list
A contest entry
- a lack of words by freestallion.
600 points, ended January 29, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i havent written for a very long time meny know the reason : be kind
Comments
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Wow. This is absolutely incredible. It's a long, long story why this poem is so...impacting for me. You did a great job with the prompt. Excellent.
Best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Wow~
Oh My Word Precious~ this is a Powerful piece and NO it does not suck
It is good to see Your quill dancing and spilling ink Beautiful~
Powerful images also energy Precious!!
Adore the border too
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Grammy Desire~*~
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This doesn't completely suck. Its actually very good. I can defiantly relate.
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wow this poem is amazing i can relate to it in a verry deep way
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It doesn't suck at all I loved the first stanza it's so powerful and you have beautiful imagary. I think you did a great job sis, good luck in the contest. Love you ♥
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