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The color(s) of my world

my eyes seem to bleed different colors
depending on the emotional turmoil
within myself at that moment
they show a certain part of my life
for everyone to know and see
if you look at me you would see

sunny yellow tears                                            hope
        radiant orange tears                                          tenderness
bright pink tears                                                love
      sparkling brass tears                                          devotion
lustrous bronze tears                                        yearning
              satiny crimson tear's                                          heartache
polished green tears                                          lust
      shiny blue tears                                                loneliness
glistening red tears                                            agony
        glossy amber tears                                            dejection
brilliant purple tears                                          misery
        clear charcoal tears                                            grief
                slick black tears                                                  pain

each day and night
the colors of my life
are the same as
the day before
but make small changes
either lighter or darker

Author notes

i changed the title just a bit by adding an s to color so its colors instead
i hope you dont mind

http://mumbojumbo89.deviantart.com/art/Protege-Moi-81919066
inspired by this pic it reminded me of your title prompt

im dealing with a lot at the moment... my gran is about to pass away with cancer... the man i want and love needs time to think if hes willing to put the time in to make things work between us... and the other guy that i want and love but not as much as the other went to iraq and broke things off... and then im trying to go back to college... im fixing to start my second semester back...its really my fifth semester...im finally a sophmore..!!

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  • roninwort
    January 6

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    I dont mind at all
    I like this poem, the description of each colored tear was done in a unique way. Great job and thank you for the entry. Good Luck.

    Ronin