Walking along down this dark dreary corridor
my icy cold heart
reaches out and leaves
frozen ice prints covered
with the marks of deep dark crimson blood.
The feeling of frozen fingers
bent in askew angles
enshroud my bare shoulder
eyes gazed down the corridor
as the corpse beheaded body
leads me into the pits of this bloody hell.
Flames casting flickering images of whats to come.
Lightning drowns out all the lost souls cries for help.
The grim reaper peers into empty soulless eyes
as the walking corpse of the dead arises once again.
Walking down this crowded haunted corridor
ghostly images cast upon thee as the darkness
consumes all light that once bared these walls naked.
The rushing sensation of not being alone anymore
surges through me as all eyes are casted upon me
as if I were new meat to be chewed up and swallowed hole.
The hounds of hell growl their approval as door after door
their meal awaits for them only to be devoured by the unknown.
Author notes
http://rippingandfailing.deviantart.com/art/The-Corridor-108435870
prompted by picture #7
thanks for the contest in advance contest holder 
A contest entry
- Dark picture prompt by desiredpain.
1075 points, ended January 10, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment if you dare Muhahaha!
Comments
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Excellent Brother!
I like the deep dark imagery here, so rich with it!
Captivates the reader, and makes for a wonderful entry indeed! All the best in the contest, bro T.
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Wow!!! Fantastic!!!
A rich compelling narrative that flows with elogance & grace down the page with such amazing imagery that takes the reader into the pits of Hell with you...
Another outstanding piece that kinda left me breathless in its intensity...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
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Its amazing what images one can conjure up in a pic that most inspires them. I love the descriptions in this piece, very dark and nicely written.
NS
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greta write. i like the dark side of you. you write some good things.
and comment if you dare. woops. haha.
i love the dark side of ya. very scary. haha.
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