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Heart to Steal

being delicate with the veins
the rhythm of each second
each rush of your life source
as I hold your heart gently

I take a step back, tugging
your body sways with me
rocking quickly from the force
I falter from momentary guilt

My nails hook, line and sinking
as I stumble forward into you
looking for a path to this course
your heart is my only clear guide

I just want to be clinging to the drumming
loving and moving to each unexpected sound

Our lips touch as a distraction
my shaking hand grasps harder
this craving becoming a steady curse
each thought filled with tasty greed

You look at me with pools of green
and I try to look anywhere far away
I can't bare the way you seem to hurt
knowing its my life long goal

I just want to be clinging to the drumming
drinking and touching each fresh beat

I can feel myself pushing you free
still holding my sweetly won prize
tugging and jerking as life is pealed away
your heart is finally dancing in my grip

and I walk swiftly into the moon light
happiness clearly marked on my lips
now you know that you were never special
nothing more than a heart to steal

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  • Euphy
    January 7

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    Wow, I really really like this =] The tone is gentle but dark, quiet, and really personal. And the cadence is like a heartbeat itself. Murmuring in a steady rhythm. Augh! It's great! I've been (guiltily) reading the Twilight series recently, and this reminds me of it a bit, with all of the references to veins and pulse, and heart. And i don't mean any offense (if you might take it that way, because I know some people hate the books, I thought I would o.O), just that the connotation reminds me of a vampire, or atleast of dark things focused on blood.

    It's lovely =].