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Redemption

There in the bowels of the city,
lying waste waiting removal.
Stench of humanity fouls the air,
another cross is being constructed.
A damaged society seeking redemption,
forgiveness not of their vocabulary.
Let the coffer be paid his due
teach the world the price of salvation.

Give a sinner the reason why they sin.
Because they were born into it.
Everyone must hang upon the cross
to be free of sin, born again.

No surprise it seems the whole world
is heading down the drain.





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  • You are right - the whole world is heading to the cesspit of Satan, a boiling mass of earthly turds. I liked your poem a little bit.

  • Sad! Dying to self, or crucifying the flesh is only surrendering to God and His love.It's a misconception to think that we must make ourselves suffer to be a Christian.Suffering and persecution will come to each Christian:However, we cannot make ourselves