**she let me fall
to my knees
my eyes like candy canes
in love with her**
sweet cheeks blushing
like strawberries and cream
her touch like cherries
a sweet and sour dream
**she let me fall
to my knees
my eyes like candy canes
in love with her**
her face like honey on ice cream
sweeter then sugar iced tea
her breath on my neck so soft
her kiss as sweet as a honey bee
**she let me fall
to my knees
my eyes like candy canes
in love with her**
her smile it reminds me
of sweet vanilla coke
enlighten my soul
in sugar bliss we shall soak
**she let me fall
to my knees
my eyes like candy canes
in love with her**
<3..xX.Shes My Dropdead Sugar Head..xX =D
..in and out of our sweet candy kissing bed.x <3
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WOW
that was so cutee babeee i was like awehhhhhh hehe it was such a cute one, but very beautiful, how you carried alongg the middle part was really great, no forced ryhming at all it all worked in well soo amazing ! xx Rainbow <3
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haha..big sis i love this poem!!
so sweet...ur bringin up pests on my computer..hehe..
great job!
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This reads like a song with its repeated refrain. I liked the unusual imagery :
sweet cheeks blushing
like strawberries and cream
her touch like cherries
a sweet and sour dream
If only love was as sweet always, eh ?
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yay!!! i love "in sugar bliss we shall soak" and "her touch like cherries, a sweet and sour dream"
*happy dance* i <3 what you did. -
Bittersweet.
Love the repeated verse and the highly intense imagery.
Great stuff
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super cute
i like the description you give, i'm always a sucker for candy imagery... i'm not sure why... things like: "sweet cheeks blushing
like strawberries and cream" in lines 5 and 6...
just wish there was more rhythm to it. anyways, nice job =)
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