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Riverbank



riverbank
bamboo in abundance
fishing rods





Andrew Hide
12~02~2004

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Written February 13th, 2004

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    brings a smile, river bank and incipient fishing poles ..nice...PK


  • Madison Attitude
    February 16, 2004
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    Aww this sounds so relaxing! Can I come? Very good haiku. I haven't done one recently, I should get back into it like I did once before. Keep up the good work and thank you for commenting on Fog! Aimee


  • Kitesen
    February 13, 2004
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    sometimes it almost impossible to give comments this here clear as water. But to Barbera don't do it in Tokio. :0

    just put here another box of roses ;

  • Pari Ali
    February 13, 2004
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    Ill just applaud if I say anything it will sound like an echo


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 13, 2004
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    Hey
    If this place is really warm count me in too
    Nicely done sweets
    I like Barb like this background where ever did you get it
    Luv ya
    Susan~~~


  • Barb Davidson silver member
    February 13, 2004
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    oooh pretty background! Now I want to go fishing in Japan..

    Barb


  • SusanL
    February 13, 2004
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    I want to come too!!!!!

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