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Question #1

I could write promises in blood with the edge of my knife
For hours and hours on end
To bleed to death, scared and alone,
And it would all be for you.


But what's in it for me?

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Fianna Black

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  • SmidyMilton
    January 7

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    You would die in my honor
    NO.. die for me
    Truthfully.. You death shows how brave you are..
    I could not nor will I have the power to die ALONE.
    This is one of my favorites.. Sometimes a question is the best way.. To prove your point


  • She burns
    January 6
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    Once again, you said it all, how we die for love so much, it's endless...


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 5

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    love the title great write and awesome ending