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Song Of Silence

At least

  my poems

      know how

to talk.

Author notes

^^;; you kinda have to really know me to understand this one ^^
This wasnt really a poem POEM. Just some short piece to get some anger out. ^^

Please tell me what you think

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  • odette lee
    November 19
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    i like i may not know you but i can feel the anger that was meant to let out. some people judge way to fast and i choose to show much emotion as i can while writing poems. good lob


  • movedon
    March 1
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    hence why i love you.


  • Dark.Dreamer
    January 6

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    [wants to comment, but is unsure how to... doesn't really know you...]

    Well... um... here it goes I guess. Whatever happened, I hope it gets better, and I hope you can talk to someone about it. I don't really know you, but sometimes that's the person you have to talk to. I'm here... just click my name... and type =]

    ~Ashley


  • teenparent
    January 6

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    ill print it off and show mylee at the hospital.

    really scary...and well written though.

    Luke


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    January 6

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    you know you should tell me what angers you my magical Silky powers will smooth it out.=O

    But seriously I'm almost always on when you are. You can tell me anything. I promise not to tell a soul unless i have permission. ask anybody. I always keep my word.

    ~Silky

    p.s. reply in Illyria and Morning Comes too Soon

    • SongOfSilence
      February 4
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      I doubt even your magical silky powers could smooth this out





      p.s will finally reply in Morning Comes Too Soon give me a day or two

      • SilverMoonFeathers
        February 4
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        you doubt the magical silky powers that smoothen everything ~GASP~


        try me i'm good at helping people with their issues




        p.s. really amy i like in a dream? is this like a fake comment are you finally going to reply GASPSxmilliongazillions

        • SongOfSilence
          February 4
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          I doubt

          I dont doubt that you are

          ps Yesh, this is fer real ^^ i will comment.. sooner or later ^^;; O.o


  • Beauty Of Silence
    January 6

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    what or who pissed you off!?! wow, this is really short, and pretty impactful. i like the structure and how hard-hitting your words are. they're so simple, but hugely impactful.

    (i dont know much about you- other than the fact that you're a fellow goofball, and u have the misconception that i am stalking you. and u panic alot) wow, seems like i DO know u


    • SongOfSilence
      January 6
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      Many things pissed me off O.o

      Thanks

      I dont panic a lot -.- and YOU are STALKING ME!! XD


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    January 5

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    Ish still gonna come over and tack her for you ^^

    Pwease cheer up ^^
    you ish not allowed to be saddened

    I'm here if you needs me
    Loves you Aiden


  • Merry Christmas
    January 5

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    You know how to talk Aidy, you just can't. But it's kay, I still wuvs you

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