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Broken Rose (Finished)

A broken moon hangs in the sky
It shines a dim light through the haze
Causing blurry visions so all the world can't see
An angel cries tonight
She sits alone and wonders why
Every time she tries
She is always brought down to her knees
And like a broken rose
Her petals scatter across the wind
Through another raging storm
She hangs on for dear life again

PRE CHORUS:
And she climbs in her cage
And she locks the door
She says its better to never hold on
Than to have to let go

CHORUS:

When she cries, she cries alone
She dies, her insides are gone
Withered away by a life thats done her wrong
She sits in the dark so she cant see her heart on the floor
She burns all her crosses
Her heart to die, wonder why
she doesnt know she will bloom in the spring
In the warm sunshine, in the rain filled breeze
The rain will quench her longing to be whole again
Yes the rain will quench her needs

VERSE:

Her head falls in her hands
And then she cries
She is breaking down again
Her heart it slowly dies
Her  chest is tight and she can not breathe
What did she ever do to him?
Will she ever mend her soul?
Will she ever love again?
An angel that does not deserve
To live a broken rose

PRE CHORUS:

And she climbs in her cage
And she locks the door
She says its better to never hold on
Than to have to let go

CHORUS:

When she cries, she cries alone
She dies, her insides are gone
Withered away by a life thats done her wrong
She sits in the dark so she cant see her heart on the floor
She burns all her crosses
Her heart to die, wonder why
she doesnt know she will bloom in the spring
In the warm sunshine, in the rain filled breeze
The rain will quench her longing to be whole again
Yes the rain will quench her needs

(BRIDGE)

Like a water fall of falling rain
It will wash her clean she will breath again
And then the sunshine wil warm her soul she will bloom but then

PRE CHORUS:

She will climb into her cage
And she will lock the door
And she will let it all go
Before she ever holds on

CHORUS:

When she cries, she cries alone
She dies, her insides are gone
Withered away by a life thats done her wrong
She sits in the dark so she cant see her heart on the floor
She burns all her crosses
Her heart to die, wonder why
she doesnt know she will bloom in the spring
In the warm sunshine, in the rain filled breeze
The rain will quench her longing to be whole again
Yes the rain will quench her needs











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  • tidoubleguher
    November 9

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    I'd love to actually HEAR this. It sounds like a smash up of the songs "She Never Cried In Front Of Me" and "Every Rose Has A Thorn" lyrical wise? idk maybe its just me loving it!


  • Qjones22
    November 3
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    Good Job!!!

    I love this, It has a lot of meaning and Ive never seen anything like it!!!!!


  • judy011
    February 17
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    WOW!

    that good i love it babe


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    February 11

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    I absoutely loved it

    This is me to a T I hope you didn't write it for me cause it definately fits me. Great job and good song. s


  • Qjones22
    February 2
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    Great!!

    I think that this would be a hit song!!!!

  • Gorgeously Done.

    well written. deep and emotional.
    the words are all sweet and run together well
    amazing imagery

  • this is so beautiful..
    its deep and the imagery is amazing.
    I love it..
    great write. xxx


  • xxxemo-girrlxxx
    January 9
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    great.

    this is a very nice peice.

  • Its beautiful, I'd try to help you with the chorus but nothing I could offer would do this wonderful piece justice. Im not talented enough in that area. I wish I could help but believe me you def. have something here! Gorgeous!


  • liveyourlife27
    January 7

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    good

    this is a really good song..... ill think about the chorus and try to help you out... i write songs too


  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    January 6

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    Aw, Darrran.
    This is cute, Im likin the way it sounds.
    Im sure they chorus will be wonderful, when you figure it out.

  • Awh. This is going to be so sweet.
    I might have to got o arkansa and listen to it.

    If only I could drive.

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