The anxiety in her kisses gave me visions of our future
Why do you doubt my love? Didn’t we find eternity each others eyes?
I’m going crazy, you’re wavering affection is slowly shattering my sanity
Girl don’t become withdrawn this love will escape oblivion.
Yes, were caught in this world and we will always straddle
the line between sinners and saints
Even if corruptions enter our hearts please promise
that the love keep for me will remain pure.
“Cuz you’re my lady “and I’ll do the same,
I sometimes wander these streets
becoming the very thing I guard you from
Just know whatever I do, is only for you,
too protect you’re smile into tomorrow.
What dominates my dreams and makes me takes another breath
is this kind of love you keep showing me
If I can’t believe in anything else can I keep believing in us?
Author notes
haven't wrote anything in awhile so I am trying to get back into the swing of writing. Love some feed back on this one please.
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Comments
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Nice write bro! Glad to see you back at it again. check the line "too protect you're smile into tomorrow" . I love this real, down to earth piece bro! Keep up the great work.
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I love it! Very sweet! It kinda reminds me of me and my man and how we wish we could isolate one another from the world. Well penned and nice to see your ink flowin again
Peace and Love
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