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glazed stone steps (5-7-5 haiku)




glazed stone steps beckon

tricking me to twist and fall ~  

gold dogs slide with grace

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Have you ever seen two golden retrievers slide on the icy steps? They do even that with beauty!

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 30

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    this is a form i have not mastered and i admire those of you who have. congratulations on the honorable mention you have earned with this write. viyanna rosemarie


  • Malabu
    February 2

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    they do seem to handle the slide graceful, don't they

    i like the images here
    thanks for your entry


    • thelordreigns gold member
      February 2
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      Thank you Sweetie for the opportunity to capture that moment and for the honorable mention.

      - joanne -


  • DogFish silver member
    January 17
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    ouch!


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 11

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    Awww, doggie ice skatng, that must be cute. What an original haiku. Thank you for sharing your poetry with me.

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