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Falling Leaves

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soft mulch of wet leaves
crushed by feet of gay children-
evidence of time

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The events of the passing of time. Picture from MSN images.

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 17

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    Thanks for your entry:

    "soft mulch of wet leaves
    crushed by feet of gay children-
    evidence of time"


    This is sweet and vivid.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 11

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    Good write here

    In the medical world and all the meds used to ecxperiment on the living and the babies growing within change is come to pass and toying with the harmons of our bodies change is not something we chose but was given through birth . Look at all the chemicals our government allows in our foods and all that we inguest in time . Dont think it doesnt have a bareing on growth of the new child being boen . I think time has gone full circle and we havent seen everything yet for in other countries their are chidren being born with haie under their arms and think about it . We have let our world diret us into a chemical frenzie how about we grow our own food and tend to our life chemical free and see the great change of less illnesses and bring humanity back


  • Sandygram
    January 8

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    Good Morning

    You have penned a beautiful hailku. Each line lovely imagery. Fall is my favorite time of the year. A delight to read this morning. I hope all has been well with you. You take care. Hugs and Smiles for the New Year.

    Blessings,
    Sandy

  • Dennis Pickering
    January 6

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    Hello Brazos

    Falling leaves - what’s that signify?
    An end of growth and lullaby?
    Or just a time to start anew
    A fresh day with the morning’s dew.


  • smonte19124 gold member
    January 6

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    BEAUTIFUL!!

    I see the master of the Haiku is hard at work again. (smile) I love the imagery of your beautiful words. Thank you for the glimpse into times past and good luck in the contest with this winning write. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Rheea gold member
    January 6
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    fall fall fall leaves and make a picture and they do.
    I like this.


  • ennovy silver member
    January 5

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    Oh the memories I have a playing in red, gold and brown leaves...kicking them about in my world of make-believe....this Haiku rocked my youth.....excellent write....Novy


    I You

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